Write an essay in which you explain how [the author] builds an argument to persuade [his/her] audience that [author’s claim]. In your essay, analyze how [the author] uses one or more of the features listed above (or features of your own choice) to strengthen the logic and persuasiveness of [his/her] argument. Be sure that your analysis focuses on the most relevant features of the passage. Your essay should not explain whether you agree with [the author’s] claims, but rather explain how the author builds an argument to persuade [his/her] audience.
`Though the essay is written very well, could it be improved further??I mean in the starting some pages, the content was lacking coherence and it was later only that all his words started moving in the same direction..Also, does writing causes or consequences in a sequence help??I mean could we be like writing causes from childhood(less focus on female education, pressuring here towards household chores) to middle ages(child marriage, high dropout around this time) to later ages(when women are discriminated in jobs)??Please help, and do point out if you felt my point was unwarranted
Is it possible to refer to refugees as part of “immigration” as I do in this essay? I think it is. Just did a quick internet search. Take a look at this fact sheet from the Australian Government headed Australian Immigration Fact Sheet 60 on the internet – it discusses refugees. http:///media/fact-sheets/
Also read this headline: “Australia Increases Refugee Quota in Broad Immigration Reform”. Immigration, in my view, can be taken as a very broad term. And refugees still come under immigration law.